Apr
19

Just to get this off my mind

Filed Under (Uncategorized) by two22 on 19-04-2008

Just to get this off my mind…

Nowadays all my friends seem to talk about;

Which is the newest shirt in their closet

What their crush did to make them pout

Which mall they’re planning to shop at

I’m sick of seeing girls act that way

They dress to impress the boys

It’s sad to see the youth in us fade away

We’re all growing up, some faster than others

If my friends hear or see me with a certain guy 

Who’s the closest guy friend I’ve ever had

They’ll come close, they don’t even try to spy

They want to catch every word and every action

I have a question no one seems to be able to answer

Why can’t I just be friends with my best guy friend

Without doing something against our better

Judgement, against what we don’t want to do?

My friend is the kind of guy that can make me

Laugh out loud, even when I’m really sad

We could not see each other for months, but be

The best of friends in an hour when we do



11 Comments Already, Leave Yours Too

   hope on 1 May, 2008 at 7:21 am #

Hey Allyson!
ok i can totally understand where your coming from but everything you listed is just a part of being a girl. It’s ok to shop in malls and gossip about guys and still be friends with them too! I think your right but there hast to be a midway point between your side and the side of your friends, maybe you should try to find it. Just a suggestion,
~Hope
p.s.- if you want to comment back i have a blog at http://mhopeb.edublogs.org/


   Katie on 1 May, 2008 at 7:22 am #

Allyson,
I can understand that your friends aggravate you some times, but why insult them all in public? Everything that you charge them with are things that nearly everyone does, you have to get around that and see the better sides of a person. I would think before you trash your best friends next time.
-Katie
*if you want to comment back to me, go to katieef.edublogs.org


   laurenkl on 1 May, 2008 at 7:28 am #

Allyson,
I think its fine that your venting but I think maybe you participate in your friends action, too? I mean we’re all just teenagers and it’s going to take us a while to be less superficial. It’s a good poem.

Lauren
My blog is laurenkl.edublogs.org


   Zainub on 1 May, 2008 at 7:33 am #

Nice poem. I really liked the comparisons.


   Zainub on 1 May, 2008 at 7:35 am #

by the way, if you want to go to my blog it is zainubd.edublogs.org


   Virginia I. on 1 May, 2008 at 7:39 am #

Allyson,
I understand where your coming from-about your friends. Everyone is growing up, including you. Maybe your not ready yet, and are having a hard time excepting it. It’s a good poem and I hope you talk to your friends and work it out.

Virginia
P.S. My blog is http://virginiabilearnerblogs.com


   Robert Currie on 1 May, 2008 at 7:42 am #

Allyson,
Although I am a boy, I know what your talking about. Why can’t we just be friends, why does gender matter?
Overall, great poem.


   Giselle on 1 May, 2008 at 9:21 am #

Hey Allyson, this poem is great.
I comepletely agree with it. Why cant guy friends JUST be guy friends? Without people assuming there’s something else going on? This poem makes perfect sense. AWESOME!!!


   Camille Kapaun on 1 May, 2008 at 10:54 am #

I really liked this. Everything about it is realy true. I aso liked the rhyming.
Good job
Camille


   Lauren Lee on 2 May, 2008 at 4:45 pm #

Allyson,
I have also been through the same problem as you have. I do agree that it becomes obnoxious once people start throwing around explanations to why you are hanging around with a boy. It’s actually a bit immature I have to admit, but I find it hilarious that some people think that once you hang out with a guy, it means that you have a crush on each other. At least you realize how irritating it can be when people make up things.


   Lauren Lee on 2 May, 2008 at 4:49 pm #

Allyson,
I have been through the same situation as you have. It can be obnoxious when people think you have a crush on a boy once you start talking to him. It’s actually a bit immature, but I usually find it hilarious how some people don’t understand that girls and guys can be just FRIENDS. At least you realize how irritating it can become.


Post a Comment
Name:
Email:
Website:
Comments:

*
To prove you're a person (not a spam script), type the security word shown in the picture.
Anti-Spam Image